tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post2971221223722310662..comments2023-10-29T01:37:16.262-07:00Comments on No SugarCoating: The day everything changed pt. 2Adaezehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18005977710433435845noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-11875393053412190862009-05-22T04:07:28.421-07:002009-05-22T04:07:28.421-07:00Hello Babaji!
No how this will be anything like No...Hello Babaji!<br />No how this will be anything like Nollywood I assure you :-D >I hope you return soon. Love your blogs!Adaezehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18005977710433435845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-25729123725799824982009-05-20T08:38:23.032-07:002009-05-20T08:38:23.032-07:001st time here and I am hooked already...I hope it ...1st time here and I am hooked already...I hope it will not be like 'Nollywood' part 2 and 3 ?<br /><br />Very interesting story. I can't wait to read the continuation.<br /><br />Take care and God bless.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-27526381530742830072009-05-19T06:40:00.000-07:002009-05-19T06:40:00.000-07:00@ Gochi - Happy to see ya! Coming up ASAP I promis...@ Gochi - Happy to see ya! Coming up ASAP I promise..just need some time on my hands, lol<br /><br />@ Enkay - Good. It's coming up ;-)<br /><br />@ Rose - Wow, that means a lot coming from you! You're a great writer as well<br /><br />@ Standtall - no, u r 2 much milady..:-) It's coming<br /><br />@ Funms - Wow, thank you so much.<br /><br />@ Omo Oba - More is coming! <br /><br />@ Doja - Wow back at you! Thanks!<br /><br />@ Nana - Wow again..Thank you for taking time to really review my writing...I wish I would have gotten that kind of response when I was in school! Good idea about ending the story at each break..That would be in your fashion no? The fashion I am eager to learn, lol. Thank you so much I truly appreciate it!Adaezehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18005977710433435845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-62913203646881674032009-05-17T06:13:00.001-07:002009-05-17T06:13:00.001-07:00It is amazing how much fidelity to reality you man...It is amazing how much fidelity to reality you manage to maintain, as you 'report' a true story.<br /><br />I thought it was appropriate, the quick, staccato beginning to part 2, or, more appropriately, the aftermath of B's father's death. It depicts the sense of whirlwind confusion that engulfs the whole family. That was very apt!<br /><br />Your writer's voice is so good. It has an easy, readable pace, and never drops off to become boring.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing these stories with us.<br /><br />Oh, I forgot to say this earlier. Your breaks between the parts of this story are so 'natural' that had it not been for our human need to see the end of the story/intrigue/our curiosity, you could actually end the story at each break, and let us continue the rest on our own. (But please finish it.).<br /><br />Ciao.The Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11618359074984443470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-21604077048423469042009-05-17T06:13:00.000-07:002009-05-17T06:13:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.The Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11618359074984443470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-49618897219996447232009-05-16T18:48:00.000-07:002009-05-16T18:48:00.000-07:00i like too! and i want more...i like too! and i want more...Omo Obahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430835237074306226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-38766030918545810932009-05-15T13:52:00.000-07:002009-05-15T13:52:00.000-07:00i have a newfound high level respect for u...........i have a newfound high level respect for u.........ur a great writer... my heart aches for B...Rebirthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10521888528235024119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-18314580285931794952009-05-15T10:18:00.000-07:002009-05-15T10:18:00.000-07:001st u moved house, 2nd u now write story; u r 2 mu...1st u moved house, 2nd u now write story; u r 2 much my Iady;<br />And mama Ieft d poor boy behind, finish it oThe Activisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10208721217617791119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-11771977096982004122009-05-15T02:55:00.000-07:002009-05-15T02:55:00.000-07:00Girl....your writing is wonderful....You'd surely ...Girl....your writing is wonderful....You'd surely see more of me around...Keep it up.....https://www.blogger.com/profile/12432017517711491089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-77625788551547067572009-05-14T08:04:00.000-07:002009-05-14T08:04:00.000-07:00Hmmm, you're quite a story teller!
I'm not going a...Hmmm, you're quite a story teller!<br />I'm not going anywhere. Waiting for the rest of the story.<br /><br />I sure feel sad for B. SO sad.Enkayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09513593787004243051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-19961028189133133822009-05-14T06:36:00.000-07:002009-05-14T06:36:00.000-07:00NOoooooooooooooooooooo, you can't leave it there, ...NOoooooooooooooooooooo, you can't leave it there, please finish the story soon ;)<br /><br />I am finding a lot of cool blogs today, glad i stumbled until yoursGochihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17883887259474408747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-90921142386505126352009-05-14T06:06:00.000-07:002009-05-14T06:06:00.000-07:00@ Crnk Monkey - hmm I'm not sure what you mean but...@ Crnk Monkey - hmm I'm not sure what you mean but hey I can't uncover the future of the story :-p<br /><br />@ Jhazmyn - I know, it is very sad..:(<br /><br />@ Aloted - Yes, it is a true story. I will come up with part 3 next week, hehe. I am actually writing this stuff whle doing other things at work so expect some flaws here and there. Yes of course B can bathe himself but he is a loved lil boy and still small so his very caring aunty P like to take care of him esp. in the time after his fathers death. But yes he can do so himself, lol.<br /><br />@ Beulah - lol, join as a follower then you will be notified as soon as part 3 is up! thanks!Adaezehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18005977710433435845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-50105603664095476792009-05-14T05:58:00.000-07:002009-05-14T05:58:00.000-07:00YAy!, this story is sweet oh!, oya Ada i want to s...YAy!, this story is sweet oh!, oya Ada i want to se part 3 now now now, pls......i am salivating abeg...lol<br /><br />Excellent!Beulah!https://www.blogger.com/profile/13253476795544978424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-57983981910212400952009-05-14T05:50:00.000-07:002009-05-14T05:50:00.000-07:00wow this certainly brought tears to my eyes... sni...wow this certainly brought tears to my eyes... sniff<br /><br />did u say this was a true story...men...kai..this life!<br /><br />pls stop keeping us in suspense o..<br /><br />meanwhile silly question- if B is old enuff to sweep and clean , isnt he old enuff to baff himself..why Aunty P dey baff am? Just wonderingalotedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17293074684237435820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-41319300398936164262009-05-14T05:02:00.000-07:002009-05-14T05:02:00.000-07:00Actual tears forming at the corners of my eye? she...Actual tears forming at the corners of my eye? sheezz, its a sad onejhazmynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00937354854181520677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6238086013124385706.post-67259000378488614862009-05-14T01:48:00.000-07:002009-05-14T01:48:00.000-07:00I second Good Naija Girl.
Since this is a true s...I second Good Naija Girl. <br /><br />Since this is a true story, I hope everything won't change <I>too</I> much and B find himself as Nollywood Cinderfella.Crnk Mnyxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17908034130216250377noreply@blogger.com